17:14

turned right on the corridor and found Death in tears tells me that the world is ruined and that she has been working overtime without rest without holiday the entire year i say nothing

© elancharan
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5 thoughts on “17:14

  1. Oh, I like this a lot. The motif of Death in tears is striking, the reflection on overwork in the modern world is multifaceted, and I especially identify with the closing sentiment – what do you say?

    I have to say, reading your work has been something of an inspiration for my own – I’m intrigued by monostich, it appeals to my sensibilities as a poet of – primarily – haiku, and I’ve written a few over the last several weeks.

    Your work is distinguished as always, thanks for writing.

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